what a weird manga

>Have reverse isekai, opportunity to do lots of interesting things
>Immediately turn and use it as a lowest common denominator shounen romcom

...What a waste. And the musings of the male main character almost makes it seem like he's not familiar at all with the other world yet seemingly knowing about it at the same time. You'd think a dude that has a hard-on for elves enough to draw ecchi or possibly eromanga of them would be a bit more excited to see a real life for the first time even if the other world has been coming to our side for years outside of "it's a girl and she's an elf." There was about as much excitement there as when I get coupon fliers in the mail.

Also, what the fuck was up with her reading the manga? Was that first bit supposed to be the kid daydreaming? In which case... it's terribly drawn and executed because it has no thought bubbles or anything. And the way it continues on makes it seem like, from the reader's perspective, that she just did a psychotic bipolar 180 and flipped her shit in a nanosecond. If you're going to incorporate delusions right next to real scenes, unless you're setting up a punchline that requires you to make it look real, make it fucking distinct for ease of reading, Mangaka-sensei.

Very unimpressed with this first chapter. And this is coming from a dude with knifeear fever. If I'm not liking it when you have an elf, you've done fucked up.

step on me too pls

When the scanlator matches the manga perfectly.

It's a trap many authors fall prey too. It's not satire if you just cAll something out then do the exact thing. It's not a fresh take ,and it's not any smarter than your average garbage

Bitch you fucking destroyed my house, the fuck, you better love me.
God damn.

Dropped faster than light

It’s got an OG To Love Ru vibe

I just started reading this yesterday and I'd say the FMC is incredibly cringy. She's a weeb to the core. The translation too can be better but acceptable since it's free.

Yep, that's pure shounen trash

Just destroy my house fam

Why that fake neighbor look like Guy Fierei

Boy: OwO?

Elf: UwU

Wait what?

She destroyed his manga because the plot was cliche and offended her? Then she destroyed his house? Idk, this is definitely strange

Certainly has that familiar hajimete no gal art to it specially the elf

"it's okay if it's trash as long as keeps me entertained"
-me, right now

also I should mention that on page 26, the first panel's SFX is still in Spanish

the plot feel too forced, but oh well... I JUST CANT RESIST DOSE BIG TIDDIES.

Plot twist; it’s the same hajimete no gal MC but with a different hair style lol

Welp ima read it for the artists style

Well thats a weird ending

Feels so random but I like it