I skipped most of the dialogues. It's just messy and full of nothingness. Like the yuri thing at least because of the fantastic art.

Interesting concept, nice art, but wow, was that confusing.

What with these wall of text ? i don't remember i read novel here

Sad this never went anywhere...although it’s pretty clear why.

For a dramatic Yuri story this could work if polished up and in both writing and plot.

Holy shit was this a fucking mess.
I can see why this didn't go anywhere
A long and laborious intro and then some fucking long narration right afterword
Those 35 pages felt more like a hundred



But, like, the arts nice I guess.

To people asking for a continuation. This has been dropped for so long.

who knows if there is even a continuation for this, because this chapter translation is from around 2014 lol

to be continued but 1 shot? wtf?

Well... at least the art is decent...

cool but... "oneshot"? where's the rest?